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Trapped in a Music Box by ~rushofthewind:iconrushofthewind:



Trapped in a Music Box

She knows it
She has heard it all before
The music box in her hand has played the same tune for years
The same sad tune
She listens to her life play before her
Her soul crying as the song slows
She winds it up only to hear more
No one seems to care about her
She's all alone
Tear and bloodstained
The glass on the floor from an earlier fight has cut her
As she touches the shard, her hand bleeds
Her heart can't take it anymore
She's had enough
The music box falls from her other hand
It shatters
With that
She falls into the broken pieces
Her soul is free
Trapped no more in the music box
With a smile
She dies
Knowing that the pain will be gone
And the song can finally change
:iconrushofthewind:

Author's Comments

I wrote this to submit into my school's published booked called "Istoria".
I may write a second one, since I can submit two pieces.
I hope you like this!
:D
I shall tell you guys whether my piece was chosen for the book or not.

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:iconsilent-tiger-shadow:
o.o They better darn well choose it! Well done!

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~TheWeirdOnes
~TheSilver-BrumbyClub
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~TheStoryGuild
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It's only a dream
That I've had all my life
The dream to be happy
Although childish it may seem.
:iconrushofthewind:
Thank you!
I hope they do too.

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Frank: I prefer sweet stuff over chocolate anytime.
Ray: Dude no way M&M's are way better
Frank: But they all taste the same!!!! Put some variety in your life man!!!!
Bob: Gummy bears
"FOR PONY!"
!itzcindyrella made my icon!
:iconsilent-tiger-shadow:
No problem. Yes. You make sure they do ^-^

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|*|Clubs|*|

~TheWeirdOnes
~TheSilver-BrumbyClub
=disney-princess-club
~TheStoryGuild
=Wings-Of-Fantasy



It's only a dream
That I've had all my life
The dream to be happy
Although childish it may seem.
:iconrushofthewind:
:D
I'm excited.
People who have read it hope it gets chosen too.

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Frank: I prefer sweet stuff over chocolate anytime.
Ray: Dude no way M&M's are way better
Frank: But they all taste the same!!!! Put some variety in your life man!!!!
Bob: Gummy bears
"FOR PONY!"
!itzcindyrella made my icon!
:iconalaskanchick:
I thought of of a tune.
I miss my b string.
My aunt in texas is going to teach me to use oil pants!!!

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iT'S LIKE SOMETHING INPORTANT YOU PUT AT THE END OF A LETTER, BUT YOU CAN NEVR REMEMBER. BUT WILL THEY REMEBER? WHEN THE BLADE LICKS THE SKIN, WILL YOU BLEED YOUR SOUL OUT OR YOUR BLOOD?-Hayley Salazar
:iconalaskanchick:
I ment paints not pants. I'm such a re-re.

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iT'S LIKE SOMETHING INPORTANT YOU PUT AT THE END OF A LETTER, BUT YOU CAN NEVR REMEMBER. BUT WILL THEY REMEBER? WHEN THE BLADE LICKS THE SKIN, WILL YOU BLEED YOUR SOUL OUT OR YOUR BLOOD?-Hayley Salazar
:iconrushofthewind:
lmao

--
Frank: I prefer sweet stuff over chocolate anytime.
Ray: Dude no way M&M's are way better
Frank: But they all taste the same!!!! Put some variety in your life man!!!!
Bob: Gummy bears
"FOR PONY!"
!itzcindyrella made my icon!

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